ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK

FEEDBACK

The feedback for our rough cut is negative, as it shows no real variety ans has no real depth to it as well as being boring with nothing to it. It represents our initial idea, which is to have teh criminals talking to the screen, and as that happens, there will be a non diegetic voice over it. This narration could not be performes as there was no time before the rough cut deadline. As well as this we wanted to build from simplicity in order to then gain complexity before the final cut deadline the week after.

However, i fell that it dispays our ideas adn intentions clearly. Although it show no good use of the four micro elements, cinematography, sound, mise en scene and editing. But we will be bringing costumes and props, different camera angles and positions, editing transitions and a soundtrack into it later to get it to a good standard for our final piece.