Evaluation Pictures

ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK

FEEDBACK

The feedback for our rough cut is negative, as it shows no real variety ans has no real depth to it as well as being boring with nothing to it. It represents our initial idea, which is to have teh criminals talking to the screen, and as that happens, there will be a non diegetic voice over it. This narration could not be performes as there was no time before the rough cut deadline. As well as this we wanted to build from simplicity in order to then gain complexity before the final cut deadline the week after.

However, i fell that it dispays our ideas adn intentions clearly. Although it show no good use of the four micro elements, cinematography, sound, mise en scene and editing. But we will be bringing costumes and props, different camera angles and positions, editing transitions and a soundtrack into it later to get it to a good standard for our final piece.

ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK

U2-68 FILM OPENING- FINAL CUT

SPEECH

SPEECH

WORDS THAT WILL BE THE NON DIEGETIC VOICE OVER NARRATION

Bussiness as usual. Some people ask me the question, what do i do? And i tell em, its not about the money, the drugs, the violence, oh no my friend, its business as usual. We all like abit of the good life, some moer than others, others more than others. Take Maxi, cross him and you'll be sleeping with the fishes i assure you. He knows people, and his contacts know people. He can pack a punch too.

CHARACTERS, LOCATION ADN PLOTS

CHARACTERS, LOCATIONS AND PLOTS

WHICH ARE USED IN OUR FILM OPENING

LOCATION

We have filmed our opening sequence in many different settings. These include Hills road, the posh looking buildings really adding to our sequence visually, as well as by the walkway at Long road. These will give our opening much variety and is important in order for the sequence to flow and maintain the conventions of the crime caper genre. Furthermore, we will be filming one more scene in Linton, the tranquil setting adding to the variety of the usual urban location. 

CHARACTERS

We have three main characters in this opening, who all conspire together and all important to the story line. There is also another character, whose identity remains identity, as he is the boss in the sequence, and his use of non diegetic sound as a narration tells the audience about the other characters, who all entwine.

PROPS

Are use of props is very limited. The use of the briefcase is the main focus point and the plot is based around this prop which is of huge importance to the film opening of the crime caper. As well as this a newspaper is used to also hide identity. Furthermore used briefly is a car, a phone, headset and set of keys.

CLOTHING

Just black jackets and simple clothing are used for the three main characters, and for the two hidden men standing beside the boss, two suits will be used, giving them status and power. Like props, we have limited the clothing, which outs focus on the main plot.